1) Type up your feedback in full (you don't need to write the mark and grade if you want to keep this confidential).
.WWW: A good assessment ,Maen! you are able to apply denotation to the unseen media product. Able to consider camera shot and mis-en-scene for the WaterAid advert
EBI: More examples of how the Heat advert use connotations . Consider giving exanples for how the water Aid advert incudes mise-en-scene to communicate to their audience2) Read the mark scheme for this assessment carefully. Write down the mark you achieved for each question:
Q1: 1
Q2: 1
Q3: 4
Q4: 2
Q5: 3
Q6: 3
3) Identify one of your stronger questions. Why did you do better on this question? Use the mark scheme to help you with this.
I answered questions 4 well because I mentioned the background I seed the wall looks like mud which suggests poverty
4) Identify one of your weaker questions. Why did you score lower on this particular question? Use the mark scheme to help you with this.
4) Identify one of your weaker questions. Why did you score lower on this particular question? Use the mark scheme to help you with this.
in Q3 I scored 4 of 12 because i needed to give more connotations about the advert
5) Finally, write a new, detailed paragraph for Question 3 - the unseen text 12 mark question. Use the mark scheme to identify anticipated content you can add to your response and make sure you refer to the text and write in detail.
In the advert .a low-angle is used to show Beyonce is a celebrity and is powerful and well known. It makes the audience ont to buy the perfume
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